Point of view

1st person- I, me, my, mine, we, us, our, our’s, myself, ourselves.

3rd person- he, she, her, his, him, they, them, herself, himself, themselves, character’s name, it, itself, oneself, somone, one, anyone, either, everybody, everyone, neither.

3,3,1,3,1.

As I put one foot in front of the other, I began to move forwards. The pavement was hard underneath my feet, and above me the sky was like a milkshake stain – pink and streaky. All around me wafted the sweet smell of newly grown grass.

As they slunked down the sidewalk, people all around stopped to stare. One small boy across the road ran away crying when he saw them. They walked straight through a red light, and did not stop to help the old woman across the road, and even as her handbag fell from her arm but not one of them even gave her a second glance.

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